#玛丽莲曼森[超话]#"I'm tired of things being so wishywashy and nobody standing up and saying, 'OK, this is where we're going to go.' | just want to stand up and assertmyself as the antichrist that America so fears. Instead ofliving in fear of something, I've decided to become thatwhich everybody fears."
#抠抠炖营养鸡汤#
Every day I remind myself that my inner and outer life are based on the labors of other men,living and bead,and that I must exert myself in order to give in the same measure as I have received and am still receiving.
每天我都提醒着自己:我的精神生活和物质生活都是以别人的劳动为基础的,我必须尽力以同样的分量来报偿我所获得的和至今仍在接受着的东西。
——美国科学家 爱因斯坦
Every day I remind myself that my inner and outer life are based on the labors of other men,living and bead,and that I must exert myself in order to give in the same measure as I have received and am still receiving.
每天我都提醒着自己:我的精神生活和物质生活都是以别人的劳动为基础的,我必须尽力以同样的分量来报偿我所获得的和至今仍在接受着的东西。
——美国科学家 爱因斯坦
#雅思作文# 面授班学生的作文。这种典型的用力过猛。
1 中心句太长,从句太多。
2 用词也不对,school后面弄到了lecture, 不同概念。
3 CC有问题,突然说到环保
4 最后besides用错,根本不是并列的内容。
On the other hand, a large number of communication technologies are applied in people’s life; therefore the handwriting skill is likely to be replaced by a variety of electronic devices such as mobile phones and computers to some extent since there are the increasing number of people who uses these devices which enable people to communicate more efficiently. paper-free teaching is increasingly commonplace at school. One example is in college lecture,where many university lecturers are more likely to give students homework by applications in computers, as well as students can ask about academic questions in social software. These methods are extremely eco-friendly and time-saving. Besides, people can find it easy to beautify documents by numerous typefaces when they type words in computers or mobile phones but each person normally has only one handwriting.
1 中心句太长,从句太多。
2 用词也不对,school后面弄到了lecture, 不同概念。
3 CC有问题,突然说到环保
4 最后besides用错,根本不是并列的内容。
On the other hand, a large number of communication technologies are applied in people’s life; therefore the handwriting skill is likely to be replaced by a variety of electronic devices such as mobile phones and computers to some extent since there are the increasing number of people who uses these devices which enable people to communicate more efficiently. paper-free teaching is increasingly commonplace at school. One example is in college lecture,where many university lecturers are more likely to give students homework by applications in computers, as well as students can ask about academic questions in social software. These methods are extremely eco-friendly and time-saving. Besides, people can find it easy to beautify documents by numerous typefaces when they type words in computers or mobile phones but each person normally has only one handwriting.
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