我笑鼠 其实我还蛮想学这个的 但urban 也太难了
xxx是你的武器吗投我那够一加那 那咪加那 内呢gin木漏 打啦哇 Put you on my back seat Back seat Back seat uh woo uh 一gi不露 内泼料多You don't have to fight 不漏我哥哈几马Put you on my back seat Back seat Back seat Now let's get it on on my back seat ​​​

批改札记
文/Livi

帮学生批改完笔译，花了整整两小时。
​其实这种批改真的很累，除了要批改，指出问题，为了防止让学生悬在那里，还要给出更好的版本。

但是要负责任，并且自己作为学生也理解学生的诉求，所以每一次都是要令其知所以然，而不单单是只知一二。

图一是原文。
​这一篇的难点在于非常细碎和文学化，细节很多。
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​附上修改的版本里面，很喜欢的几个句子和表达：

（在一天夜里，房顶塌下了一堆泥土，差一点没掉到坑上）父母下了决心，盖房子！
This close call prompted my parents to make a firm decision.
*喜欢这个close call

父母不敢睡，整夜轮流看着房顶。
My parents stayed awake, taking turns keeping an eye on the roof.

每年都要请瓦工来维修，但治标却难治本。
We hire a bricklayer every year for repairs, but it's a never-ending cycle.
*这边当然可以用很多方法去译治标不治本，比如a temporary fix, a Band-aid solution等等，但都没这个版本自然。

质量虽然不好，村民们却都很羡慕。
It wasn't that great, but it sure was the envy of the town.
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​母亲的愁思爬上了鬓角
​As worries burdened her mind, strands of white began to weave through my mother's once-dark hair(at the temples).
​*翻译绝对不是字对字，而是思索后的再创造。这边的鬓发当然也可以翻出来，但是过于追求形式对等其实也没必要。

用笔译家方柏林在《翻译是一场漫长的卧游》写的，“人说作家写作是码字，这么说的话，翻译是搬迁加建筑加装修。你将人码好的字拆了，一个钉子户不留，一块块运走，然后放新地方，重新码起来，拾掇齐整，末了还得给收拾好，不留垃圾让人看着扎眼。一般人以为这只是中英文功底问题，其实做这活也需要时间，需要精力，需要体力。这不是人干的事，这是超人干的事”。

Waiting is difficult. However, God’s plans for us are always the best. Trust and faith in God even when things don't happen according to your desires or timeline. Sometimes God's answer to our prayers is simply to wait. Hope in God often involves waiting patiently for God's will to unfold.

Isaiah 40:31: "But those who hope in the Lord will renew their strength. They will soar on wings like eagles; they will run and not grow weary; they will walk and not faint."
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